Re: I'm bad at sales pages - need input on this one

> Looking for some input and advice here.....

Hi Jim, I too had problems downloading but I do have dial up, I had a hard time reading the copy with the greys and the background paper, those are minor items to fix. As a prospective buyer, i WOULD NEED AT LEAST 3 references of other business that you had help set up, 6 month up to year- are they still doing.
I might even run a background check on you, Who is this man wanting to come see me in my house. I commend you are involving your son. But be cafeful, You really don't know these days, some psyco might think he would be getting a 2 for deal wiht the kid. I have been watching to Datline this week. Where they set guys up in chat room to meet at this house and of course the guys are 20's, 30's. They serch one guys car and he had rope and duct tape. He knew he was going to meet a 15 year old girl who parents are gone for the weeknd.

Everyone else had some great ideas, finding your market will be hard. Like Mel said some like me are disabled and can't work 40 even from home, Then may be the younger ones are go getter and hit the streets running.

Homewor, homework, research and reseach the homes you would go in

Then follow up weekly biweekly early on, if this plan works they can be ebay seller.

Just a thought, if you set them up and learn it, then decided to what you do travel to teach, tand this goes on for a awhile won't it satuate Ebay and devaiue what ever the product. I have been told to see my art work on Ebay, My work is the real deal. not fake or faux stained. The all this crappy sun catchers gazing balls, wind chime for under 10 bucks I can compeite with that.
MY website is about me, I tell you enough about me that you might read the other pages on my site. I am selling me to custom design a stained glass project. I sell stuff in the gallery, I like the spercial commissons better

Sorry to ramble on , Good luck to you, it does need a few twweks and a little more about you and your accomplishments Carla It is late please forgive my typos.

The copy on my page is a bit blunt and not your typical sales page type
> fluff.

> I wanted to come across as a bit of a jerk because, well, I kinda am one
> and the product I'm selling here is myself. I want people to know what
> they're getting here.

> Just wondering what people's first impression is here and if this was
> something they were looking for, would there be enough there to make them
> pick up the phone and call.

> Or should I just take it in the typical sales page direction instead?

> Any input is appreciated.